Motivasyon yazisi

[RojelatDuru]

Buna benzer konuyla ilgili daha yeni baslik attim ama motivasyon yazimla ilgili yorum yapabilirmisiniz? yardim edebilcek arkadaslara mail olarak atiyim

[Physiker]

Yaziyi buraya eklersen bakabiliriz.

[RojelatDuru]

To German Council
My name is Dogu Duru and I was born in Antalya in 30 April 1998. I started my education life in Antalya College. In forth grade I got in Antalya College Swimming Team. After ten years I had to change my school and I started Antalya Yeditepe High School. After two years I passed the university exam and now I’m a student of Ozyegin Universty at Mechanical Engineering.
Almost for two years I searched and think about my future career. For that, I ask myself, “What I want in the future ? Which carrer will enjoy me for the rest of my life?”. The answer was Automotiv sector . My interest about cars and motorcycle since my childhood and working at Mercedes¬-Benz Services for two months, were very affective at my choise and in a short time I find answers to my questions confidently.
After that , I start to search about Universities for Mechanical Engineering. It is very hard for me because there were so many choiceses. Almost for 2 years my dad and I research perfect university for me. Than, especially after talk with my German friends and with my older friend who go to the Universty in Germany also his friends and nieces who live in Germany, I started to think Germany is the best choise. But of cource this isn’t the only reason. Germany has fascinating reputation with its succes at Automotive sector included universities quality. For sure everybody want to take education at homeland of enginnering for Mechanical Engineering. This specialities of Germany not like any others cause my desire. I realise , Germany give so much important to sport, artistic values and nature. As a national team swimmer, I belive these values will keep me hardworking and keep me in the line for my goal.
Right now I have to take C1 certifkate for go to the University in Germany. For that I have been in Frankfurt and take language cource at Goethe Instute for 6 week. But for take C1 I need much more practice. For that I want to go Goethe Instetut again but for longer.

[RojelatDuru]

gramatik olarak tam olarak kontrol edemedigimi belirtiyim ama genede spesifik bir yanlis gorurseniy belirtmekten cekinmeyin sunuda belirtiyim vize amacim dil kursu. ama biraz fazla konu disina ciktigimi dunuyorum

[Florenzi]

Antalya Koleji mezunusun demek. Vay be eski anilarim canlandi. Bize rakip bi okuldu 90\'lar ortasinda. Bende Akev Koleji 2000 mezunuyum. O zaman Antalya\'da 3 Kolej vardi. Akdeniz, Antalya ve Akev. Vakif oldugumuz icin en ucuzu bizdik Ama unutmam hic. 7. sinifa giderken gordugumuz haftalik ingilizce ders saati 30 saatti. 7. sinifta gordugumuz ingilizce kitaplarini Anadolu Liseleri lise doneminde gosteriyodu Zehir gibiydik anlayacagin. Tabi simdiki kolejlerdeki egitim durumu nasil bilmiyorum. Benim gordugum bos bina bulan kolej aciyo Antalya\'da
Tabi yillar gectikce Antalya ve Akdeniz Koleji sanirim isim degistirerek kayboldular. Bir Akev kaldi. Hatta simdi Antalya Akev Universitesi\'ni de actilar. Cunku cok kaliteli kuruculari vardi.
Umarim kolej yillarini en iyi sekilde degerlendirmissindir. Cunku gercekten benim zamanimda kolejde okumak bambaska bir ayricalikti. Umarim simdi de oyledir.
Kal saglicakla.

[Physiker]

Oncelikle cok kisa olmus. Neden otomotiv muhendisligi kismina biraz bolumle ilgili aciklamalar yapmalisi, alman bir kac arkadas tavsiye etti gibi cumleler yerine. O cumlenin kesinlikle olmamasi gerekiyor. Bir de baslangicta yuzme klubu vs cok gereksiz olmus. Biraz daha can alici noktalara deginmelisin. Neden hangi universite? Bolumle ilgili mercedes de calismak disinda beklentilerin neler? Ornegin hibrit otomobillere veya cevre kirligine duyarli ve cevreye daha az CO2 yayan arabalarin uretim ve teknolojisi gibi konulara vs deginebilirsin. Ayrica C1 kursu alacaksan yukarda yazdigin ingilizceden daha iyi almancan olmasi gerekiyor.